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My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
Alian2
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IF THERE WERE ONLY ONE STAR YOU WOULD SEE IT IF YOU LOOKED UP LONG ENOUGH

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The fruit

of the tree

of null edge

The surest way

through a wormhole

Is inside of a Klein bottle

If you thought that was hard

You never tried getting out alone

Simply looking in a mirror won't work

Like getting out of a hypercube easy way

Or break it open with anything known to man

You have to make an orange door hinged wrong

Appear right there made out of nothing but thin air

I promise I would tell you how if I knew how to myself

But it really, really is you so you already knew didn't you


The orange door hinges open with a hauntingly sorrowful sigh


She knows her entire universe is just a mere Klein Bottle

And the cooperative computer argues in the dark

While the ones futilely search for matches

As the siren wails through the halls

Blissful without a single end

Ever within her sight

Or within range

Amazing

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The Goddess


Sound off. Sensors On.

Antimatter shields are... UP!

Palms to the sky she climbs the air.

Can you see it there just under her feet?


With a glance the Mermaids fled the long shore

With a breath the ships rounded the world

With a stare the clouds all scattered

With a word the planets aligned

And with a single thought

The stars were gone


Save one

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LunaC
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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
I'll give you credit. That was an impressive composition.

Fléctere Si Néqueo Súperos Acheronta Movebo
I never dreamed I'd grow up to be an asshole. But here I am. Killing it.
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Alian2
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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War



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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
LunaC  Wrote: (07-26-2019 01:35 AM)
I'll give you credit. That was an impressive composition.



You are amazing

and it's not even May.


I was thinking of a different thread title like, "Desperately seeking Inanna's Earthly Avatar", but that sounded both tacky and desperate.

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Alian2
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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
I wrote this for Inanna, but my faith is weakening as I consider my current situation and look at this leg.

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Bump

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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
Bump

things that go bump in the night.

chuckle

Follow Lois Lane to Penelope Lane.
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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
War laughed, and looked expectantly at the Them.
"Little boys," she said, "playing with your toys. Think of all the toys I can offer you . . . think of all the games. I can make you fall in love with me, little boys. Little boys with your little guns."
She laughed again, but the machine-gun stutter died away as Pepper stepped forward and raised a trembling arm.
It wasn't much of a sword, but it was about the best you could do with two bits of wood and a piece of string. War stared at it.
"I see," she said. "Mano a mano, eh?" She drew her own blade and brought it up so that it made a noise like a finger being dragged around a wineglass.
There was a flash as they connected.
Death stared into Adam's eyes.
There was a pathetic jingling noise.
"Don't touch it!" snapped Adam, without moving his head.
The Them stared at the sword rocking to a standstill on the concrete path.
" 'Little boys,' " muttered Pepper, disgustedly. Sooner or later everyone has to decide which gang they belong to.

-"Good Omens", Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett. Red Queen hypothesis, anyone?

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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_Queen_hypothesis

They will find many armies to test them, but none to resist.
They will come in their shining ships to conquer and destroy,
Barbarians of gold and feathers and serpents of fire.
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Alian2
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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
I'm sorry.

It was the Oxy withdrawal talking.

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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
Lakeofmarch  Wrote: (07-26-2019 08:12 PM)
War laughed, and looked expectantly at the Them.
"Little boys," she said, "playing with your toys. Think of all the toys I can offer you . . . think of all the games. I can make you fall in love with me, little boys. Little boys with your little guns."
She laughed again, but the machine-gun stutter died away as Pepper stepped forward and raised a trembling arm.
It wasn't much of a sword, but it was about the best you could do with two bits of wood and a piece of string. War stared at it.
"I see," she said. "Mano a mano, eh?" She drew her own blade and brought it up so that it made a noise like a finger being dragged around a wineglass.
There was a flash as they connected.
Death stared into Adam's eyes.
There was a pathetic jingling noise.
"Don't touch it!" snapped Adam, without moving his head.
The Them stared at the sword rocking to a standstill on the concrete path.
" 'Little boys,' " muttered Pepper, disgustedly. Sooner or later everyone has to decide which gang they belong to.

-"Good Omens", Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett. Red Queen hypothesis, anyone?

[Image: 2v2uLZSdFxAChVk.jpg]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_Queen_hypothesis

She has red hair and green eyes.

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Alian2
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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
If you want to pray to her do it palms to the sky.

Parallel to the sky, facing up, as high as you can. Over the head is best unless you can't. Standing on grass helps. You can feel the chi flow.

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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
Are you trying to write poetry, OP, or just make patterns with the words?

It is a fine thing to be honest, but it is also very important to be right. - Winston Churchill
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Albrecht Bear  Wrote: (07-27-2019 03:21 AM)
Are you trying to write poetry, OP, or just make patterns with the words?

Both.

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RE: My latest poem for The Goddess of Love and War
Alian2  Wrote: (07-27-2019 03:23 AM)
Albrecht Bear  Wrote: (07-27-2019 03:21 AM)
Are you trying to write poetry, OP, or just make patterns with the words?

Both.

I'd stick to just one or the other if I were you.

It is a fine thing to be honest, but it is also very important to be right. - Winston Churchill
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